Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Corrected: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe that everyone should practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected: To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project- doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Correction: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Correction: Olga and I went downtown, bought new notebooks for class and for our long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Corrected: Terri won the game, but at at the time, we did not know she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected: The affect of the program was canceled, which bothered most of the members to and the project before they could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Corrected: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected: Regardless to what Grandpa said, it will be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Corrected: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome the children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected: Neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word chide.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Corrected: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard and I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected: The race among the three relay teams, is close; however none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Corrected: Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, 'Within a short time free-election laser will change the world as much as the invention of electricity changed the world.'
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrows her new sweater will have to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Corrected: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Corrected: My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Corrected: Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected : There were too many things to do, so I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, nor go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Corrected: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Corrected: "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected: "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Corrected: He was ,incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected 2: Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet,will be sold out."
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Corrected: You should have followed the three steps; first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Corrected: Does Caroline know whether Raul might come have the class council meeting, at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
Corrected: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league : a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Corrected: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected: After the race begins Delia, take these medals to the track club at the school east side of here.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Corrected: "Nothing could be further from the truth than your comments" Mr. Perez stated," than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Corrected: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show, Classic Cars Reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Corrected: Because it snowed heavily last night, its all right if no one comes to the basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was 75 years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Corrected: Follow some simple rules you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Corrected: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe that everyone should practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected: To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project- doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Correction: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Correction: Olga and I went downtown, bought new notebooks for class and for our long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Corrected: Terri won the game, but at at the time, we did not know she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected: The affect of the program was canceled, which bothered most of the members to and the project before they could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Corrected: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected: Regardless to what Grandpa said, it will be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Corrected: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome the children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected: Neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word chide.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Corrected: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard and I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected: The race among the three relay teams, is close; however none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Corrected: Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, 'Within a short time free-election laser will change the world as much as the invention of electricity changed the world.'
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrows her new sweater will have to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Corrected: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Corrected: My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Corrected: Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected : There were too many things to do, so I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, nor go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Corrected: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Corrected: "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected: "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Corrected: He was ,incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected 2: Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet,will be sold out."
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Corrected: You should have followed the three steps; first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Corrected: Does Caroline know whether Raul might come have the class council meeting, at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
Corrected: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league : a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Corrected: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected: After the race begins Delia, take these medals to the track club at the school east side of here.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Corrected: "Nothing could be further from the truth than your comments" Mr. Perez stated," than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Corrected: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show, Classic Cars Reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Corrected: Because it snowed heavily last night, its all right if no one comes to the basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was 75 years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Corrected: Follow some simple rules you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.